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Tagren (Tag) Shepard
Vanguard, Spacer, War Hero.
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"Tali… Are you awake?"

"Go away glowworm!" *cough* The quarian engineer sniffed and turned around, wrapping herself tighter into the thick wool blanket, her entire body was shaking from the fever, her head felt like a humming bee-hive, her throat was ticking like she swallowed a fiberglass.

Tag smiled warmly, shaking his head – he knew Tali did not mean it, she simply was sick, and her irritation was normal. He came closer to the double bed she was lying in and took a seat on the edge, gently caressing his lover`s side through the thick blankets. Quarian smiled under the helm, it was nice to feel care of a loved and loving man! Shepard only left when she was sleeping and to speak with Mordin, except that he was always near Tali when she was not feeling well.

"I talked to Mordin, he gave me some pills for you, says you should take them before the meal…" He placed the small plastic pack of pills on the table before her, "You need to eat something, dear. You are exhausted."

"Kheela, don`t speak about the meal!" Tali covered her head with second pillow hoping it deafens his speech, "I`ll vomit… again." *cough*

It has been second day since miss Vas Normandy caught this infection – well not quite the infection, it started after their last… sharing as Tali called love making, but it was not like any other side effects she ever encountered – not even close! Sick Tali was hard to deal with - even she herself knew that, but Tag would not leave her anyways, he knew she liked when he cared for her.

Shepard placed his hand on her shoulder, it felt like he touched the working oven!

"Honey, you are hot! The temperature is rising fast." He took the pillow off her face, seeing her visor completely fogged. Tagren was not a miracle doctor like Mordin, but he was a soldier and had medical training - he knew what to do to ease the fever fast. Shepard`s palm shined cyan and the next moment Dark Energy cleared the visor, revealing Tali`s eyes. "Let me help, just relax…"

Tag closed his eyes, taking a deep breath and concentrating – the room shined with all shades of blue and purple, sending vivid shadows over the walls when the Dark Energy flowed through his hands penetrating under the suit and covering young Quarian`s body like a second skin.

"Ayahhh… Cold!" Her body trembled like being shocked by electricity, she even tried to push his hands away but Shepard resisted. "It`s cold, Tag! St-stop it!"

"Shhhh-shhh…" He whispered into her ear, while his hands were slowly moving around her body beneath the blankets, "We need to lower that temperature, that`s why you feel cold and not because my touch… How do you feel now?"

"A… A little better, soothing…" Tali sighed with relief, coughing, she was still shaking, but not as strongly as before – Dark Energy gave her body strength, it smoothed the pain, it pierced her entire body with pleasant chills casting out fever and bringing comfort and relaxation. So she was lying there, purring like a kitten while Tag was waving his shing hands over her.

After a few minutes of this so called therapy the fever slowly started to let her go, her breath became smoother, her coughs stopped. It was a temporary effect, but still she was very much grateful for this breather!

"Ahhhh… Much better!" She exhaled smiling under her mask: the body ached from the fever, the exhausted muscles refused to work, but still it was a great relief comparing to what was before! "T-thank you…"

"Now when the temperature is out you can eat, you really need to dear!" Tag shook his numbed hands and then grabbed quarian with all the blankets she wrapped herself into and helped her seat in the bed.

"Sorry I grumped at you…" She coughed again, swallowing hardly.

"Oh, it`s okay, that`s a defense mechanism, I remember!" Tag grinned, making Tali frown, but he was right. Shepard gave her a few blue pills and the glass of water. "Now take this…"

Tali held her breath and then took off visor, when Tag saw her sweaty face he understood she was very weak and exhausted. The strong shiver run through quarian`s body when she made a few sips to swallow the medicine, the warm water felt like an ice cocktail after that fever attack.
Shepard grinned, watching her smile and wink before she put the visor back, hiding her beautiful face from him again.

"Now you need to eat."

"I don`t want to!" Quarian pouted, trying to hide her head in the cocoon of blankets too, "I feel sick…"

"Dear, you need ot..."

"No way!" She hid her head completely and even took the pillow to cover it as a second helmet. In this furry warm bastion she felt safe! "I have a head ache!"

"Oh, I know what will raise your mood, my dear!" Tag grinned widely, taking the remote controller and switching the huge TV that he recently installed on, "That always made me eat things no matter how much I hate them, mom used to do that when I was a kid! The TV!"

After a few minutes Tagren finally found the needed movie and then pressed PLAY II > then ripped the pillow from Tali`s weak hands.

"You`ve got to be kidding me…" Tali looked at him sarcastically, wrapping herself tighter into her warm soft cocoon. "Fleet and Flotilla? Again?! Kheela, I don`t want to watch this turian-quarian love for the 100`th time!"

She coughed again, making her visor foggy – Tag barely held his smile. Another touch of the Biotics and she could see clear once more.

"Don`t you have anything else to watch?" She asked cranky shaking her head while Shepard was dimming the light.

"Only the porn, sorry dear!" Tag laughed sitting next to her and hugging the young quarian, "We can watch Venia if you wish though! There are asari there and…"

"Shut up pervert!" Tali picked his nose playfully, moving closer and leaning to his side, "One more word and you`ll be sleeping on the couch!"

"Oh, don`t threaten me, I`ll not be alone - I still have that breeding request from some hot Krogan cheeck on Tuchanka if you remember..."

The entire room echoed with Tali`s laughter; Shepard`s soul sang when her helmed head laid on his shoulder – a few minutes ago Tali was not able to raise a hand, and now she is joking and laughing! He made it, he actually made it!

"You ass, Shepard!" Tali giggled, feeling how Tag`s hand tickles her side, "Kheela, of all the men this galaxy could offer I got the damn comediant!"

"Here, drink this…" He reached the small thermos on the table and summoned it, "That`s some sort of soup as far as I understood, Mordin says it`s very nutritious and filling. Oh, come oooooon, for me! Please?!"

*Sigh* "Fine, you sadist… I hope you are happy now!"

"Oh, don`t worry – I have ten canisters of that delicacy!"

"I hate you…"

Tali took the metal can and opened it, putting the small pipe to her ingesting vent. The liquid was hot and spicy, and it left a very pleasant warm feeling inside… Tali mostly ate the same fluid meal when she was outside Flotilla, but this time that sup felt especially well!

"Hmm… Not bad!" She purred, pressing her side tighter to Shepard`s and watching the movie begins. "Just promise not to cry at the kissing scene again, alright?!"

"I can`t help it!" Tag sniffed, twisting the already prepared napkin between his fingers. "That`s just too beautiful!"

"Big wet sissy…" Tali chuckled again, but the most wonderful thing was that she did not cough once for the last three minutes when before she could not hold even for ten seconds!

"You know… Mordin said that this is a good sign!" Tag pressed his lips to her helm, it was not the actual kiss but still she felt it. "He says that your body struggles, that it is fighting the hostile microbes…"

"So what?" Tali sucked the last drops and put the empty thermos on the table near the bed.

"That means you are adopting!" Shepard took her "chin" and raised Tali`s helm to see her eyes, his face shined with happiness. "Soon, very soon…"

"Kheela…!" Tali dropped her head on his shoulder, sobbing – her eyes filled with hot tears, but this time it was not from pain or sickness – it was happy tears. She did not say anything, and neither she needed to – Tag felt everything, and he knew how happy she was at the moment – it was a victory, a small but very meaningful victory for them!

"Hey, shh!" He pushed her lightly, pointing at the TV, "That`s my favorite scene!"

Tali chuckled as well, her hands slipped from the cocoon and twisted around his neck; now she was even glad to have that fever – for it was the beginning of something beautiful: like the pain that gave a new life to the child – it was a small price to pay!

"Hey…" She whispered, poking Tag, "Can I have more of that soup please?"

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Well the blame for this story is all on the :iconamrrr: with his [link] After I saw this picture I could not help but write the story! :la:

It`s completely spoiler free and is about a small issue between my Shepard and Tali, I hope you like it. :-)
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Rama-Kay Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Poor, poor Tali :iconcryforeverplz:

What a nice piece!
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DOWModder Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Nah, totally worth it! :rofl:

Thnaks, Ima glad you like the story, one of my own favorites! :aww: I adore writing some fluff stuff! :D
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Rama-Kay Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
LOL :XD: and yes, that was adorable :XD:
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femshepheartz Featured By Owner May 25, 2012
D'awww how cute =D lovely story!
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DOWModder Featured By Owner May 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
thanks! :highfive: Tali is sooolovely lass, I really adore her! :huggle: Thank you for your kind words and the watch, I`m lattred! :-)
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bumbleswipe Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
this is the best shot story i have ever read it hart warming and any tali fan should love this amazing work my friend
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DOWModder Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :bow: I`m humbled by your kind words, they are very much appreciated. :hug: Glad I could write something warm and fuzzy for a change. :-)
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bumbleswipe Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
you are very welcome keep up the good work my friend
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DOWModder Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:icoblushplz:
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mrshepN7 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Very well written, although I dont like the name Tag. Anyway, it 's 8.75/10. Good job man
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DOWModder Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :nod: I`m glad you like it - and I must say you`re the first to actually mark my story with high rank, thank you! :highfive:

As for Tag - he is Tagren, this is simply shorter version. :-)
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mrshepN7 Featured By Owner Feb 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome, mate. Oh, you should upload your story to fanfiction.net.

Again, good job! Very good job!
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grimnexas Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012
Can you write more? Please? :) This story....it needs to be continued xD The universe needs more fanfiction with Tali in it! xD
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DOWModder Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Well thank you! :hug: I`m happy you like it, I`ll think of something more - can never have too much Tali! :la: BUT if you wish I have a few stories with her and my Shepard, just more recent:

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Again thank you for the kind comment, I`m always glad to make someone smile! :-)
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Kanberg Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's really cute, the edge pf my lips were reaching my ears when I smiled haha.
-At the "he kissed his helmet" thing, I laughed like hell. I could see how his lips hit her helmet, and
all she's seeing is some sort of suction catfish.
Oh.. the shame just burned inside of me. Haha.
But really good job. Very sweet.
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DOWModder Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :highfive: I`m very grateful to you for taking time to read and comment, and of course happy you like my job! :la: Good luck my friend, and thank you again! :-)
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Kanberg Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sure. I'm working on a story myself. Not fane-ficton though.
I'm making it up :b -it's going to be a tough job.
I hope you'll take the time to read it.
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DOWModder Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Of course! Note me when you are done and I`ll provide the best review I can, you have my word. :hug: Good luck with your story! :-)
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Kanberg Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hey. If you 'watch' me, then you'll get to know when the story comes out, each time I finsish a chapter. :)
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DOWModder Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
fair point! :-) Just a sec... there! :D
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Kanberg Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Haha. I'm looking foward to see your reply.
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DOWModder Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:bow:
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fugimoto Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012
awww a tali's sick n shep attending her evry need story!? i ""MUST"" read this at once! lol
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DOWModder Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks for the kind words, I`m flattered! :-)
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fugimoto Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012
sweetness i love the curling up for fleet n flotilla! XD
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artfreak959 Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012  Student Writer
D'AWWWWWWW! :love: this was so just utterly ADORABLE!!! :happybounce:

I almost did a little happy dance when i read their silly teasing about the movie and Vaenia and all the other silly things this adorable couple goes on about! :rofl: You did a great job of being funny in this one Ren! a great job!

"Just promise not to cry at the kissing scene again, alright?!"

lol i love how we get to see this side of this couple, especially Tag! While Shepard may in general be a hardcore kick-butt die-hard lifer dog of war marine, we also know that he/she is human, and thus has emotions! and its nice to see Tag's! For the tough stern Commander we know and love to be so sweet and silly around his Tali is just adorable! The ease and peace they feel around each other is a fantastic touch, and you illustrate it beautifully in even the stories that are more tense between them!

Lol you also wrote this perfectly to the picture I think =D i love the way that you described Tag caring for her, the man who can rip a Husk in half with bare hands gently holds his loving and loved quarian while she is ill!

honestly, this is a great story! oh and before i forget, i also love the way that you have tag use his biotics to keep her cool! :la: what an interesting idea! they certainly do have many uses, and this is an example of a better one!

Lorraine: :grump: how is tearing collectors apart a bad thing again? :shakefist: And y are all my stories filled with angst? Tag and Jaina get some cute ones! :tears:

lol :iconlegaspplz: i dont know what happened there...

Anyway! I thought this was ADORABLE. i dont know what you're talking about, you're fantastic at writing romances, combat, pretty much everything! :tighthug: what with all this fuzzy cuteness you're gonna make all of devianart explode into a ball of devious Tali-Tag fluff!! :love: lol keep it up my friend im loving all this fuzzy fluff! :iconifeelfluffyplz:
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DOWModder Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ohh, Merrit you are making me blush! :hug: Thank you for as always very detailed and thorough review my friend, you are the best! :la: :glomp:

I`m happy you like the story, `cause I really had to try something funny again, I`m so tired of angst - my poor heroes have had enough of it!

Tag: For a life time! :shakefist:

Jaina: Or two in our case! :meditate:

Combat is good, but there is a lot of this stuff here, so need some devercity! :nod:

Don`t worry Lorraine - you are strong and beautiful, and your stories are cool and very much absorbing, you are in a good hands! ;-)

As for being silly - we men are like that sometimes: they say that there is a little boy hiding inside every man, and I think it`s true! :nod: Shepard - especially male - is very determined and all so manly and brutal, but hey - everybody changes when they come back from the job right? ;-)

Once again thank you for the yet another wonderful review my dearest friend! :huggle: I`m very much grateful and honored - and flattered! :blush:
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artfreak959 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012  Student Writer
Im glad you liked my review and once again, it was a fantastic story! :w00t: lol well hopefully Lorraine can live up to the bar Jaina and Tag keep raising! :love: I cant wait to read more of your work! please keep it up!!! :hug:

you're very welcome and im glad you like my reviews!! :blush:
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DOWModder Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Oh I`m sure Lorraine will, in your hands she can`t fail my friend! ;-)
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artfreak959 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012  Student Writer
AWWW! :blush: well thank you very much!! :love:
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PascalunaOriginals Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
D'awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww, this was so sweet, and cute and funny! You've done another wonderful job on this, and as always I absolutely love it. The interaction between them is so good! Tali is such a grump when she's sick. hehe Fantastic my dear, you've done it again. Great work! I can't wait to read more. :squee:
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DOWModder Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I`m glad you think so my friend! :huggle: Thank you for another dose of kindness and warmtn, your support really keeps me going :dance: it is always good to know that there is someone ready to read your work and more even waiting for it! :hug: Thank you, and be sure that I await your new chapters as well, my dearest! :glomp:

I`m happy and honored... and I`m sure blessed as well to have you as a friend Selly! :la:
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DAGIRL101 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:love: This so cute, Ren!!!!! It made me :iconifeelfluffyplz: while reading this!!! And, the story defiantely fits really well with the picture that inspired this story!!!! It has everything that comes with a being sick day; warm blankets, medicine, hot food, and of course, the movie marathon to help pass the time!!!!! :D

And Tagren and Tali, they are always so cute together!!!! :flirty: Love that no matter how grumpy Tali is, Tagren never leaves her side!!!! But, it helps to have someone take care of you when you're sick, especially if that person happens to be Tag. :)

Excellent story Ren!!!!! It made me feel all fluffy and love how Tagren is so caregiving to Tali!!!! See you soon and be safe, Ren!!!! :iconhyperglompplz:
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DOWModder Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awwww... Rae! :iconblushplz: You making me blush again, but thank you my dearest! :glomp: I felt like writing some romantic stuff and as always put my Shepards through the worst it`s refreshing to make something funny and fluffy as you say from time to time to make people :D!

I know what it means to be very sick, both as a sickman and as a caretaker, so it wasn`t hard to imagine! :nod: And Tag - well I can`t understand how somebody can`t be nice with Tali, she is just toooo much damn cute! Dangerously cute even! :iconlawooplz:

Once again thank for as always great review my friend! :hug: Best luck Rae! :D
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SaintsLeader Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012
Haha, dude that awesome, amazing short story.
AND THANK YOU! Finally someone I found added the fact that quarians can adapt to there lovers and some of the surroundings. Its not always going to be a life threatening chance when Tali is being exposed.
But again, great job with the story. :)
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DOWModder Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
The pleasure is all mine! :bow: I`m glad you like my job, thank you for taking time to read and leave this kind comment, I very much value and appreciate every single one! :highfive:

Be well and stay safe my frind! :D
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SaintsLeader Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012
Your quite welcome. :)
As you stay safe and healhy.
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Savvid Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:XD: That was SO SO cute Ren, and it fits PERFECTLY with the image that inspired you!!!! :XD:
Lucky Tali you lucky female! :giggle: You have such a gentleman to look after you!!! :flirty:
I can't but agree with everyone in here Ren, this is very warm and fuzzy and absolutely SO TALI!!!! :la: :la: :la:
Tag is adorable :XD: heehehehheeheh :hug:
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DOWModder Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I always wait your comments anxiuosly, Yan, your opinion is very important and I`m very much overjoyed... if I may say so that you like my story - writing erous stuff is important, but it`s getting depressing if constant, funny and romantic moments are like sun rays broking through the clouds: writing those gives me strength and good mood, and I`m glad that it does the same to you - werll good mood I mean! :-)

Your somment makes ME feel warm and fuzzy like this :iconifeelfluffyplz:

Once again thank you my friend! :glomp:
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Savvid Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:) Well of course! And you can be proud! Someone can't be a good writer only because of his 'serious' matters/stories! Don't think that writing funny things is easy! ;) But you manage this too, so yes, you must feel warm and fuzzy like that :iconifeelfluffyplz: :iconifeelfluffyplz: :iconifeelfluffyplz: haahahahahahaha :XD:
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DOWModder Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awwww.... :iconblushplz: Thank you my dearest! :tighthug: The same goes for you - I mean in your works you show everything from saddness to the :rofl:ing stuff! :D You are the best my friend! :glomp:
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highLifetec Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012
That story was c&c (cool&cute) :D

Good work :clap:
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DOWModder Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! :highfive:
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highLifetec Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2012
You're welcome :pat:
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remedypain Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:XD: haahahahahah that was SO hilarious and sweet Ren!!! I laughed very much when Tag pretends that he always cries watching fleet and flotilla :rofl: ahhahahaha
And Tali is so cute all grumpy and whiny, as if she does it on purpose so Tag would look after her more! ;) and as far as I know and I can tell as a woman, she really DOES it on purpose!! :giggle: hahahaahhha our best way to gain attention ehheheheheheh
I love the way he take care of her, Tag you are such a gentleman my friend!! :highfive:

Excellent chapter Ren, once again!!! ;) :glomp:

PS: Nice and wise use of her body's reaction and of the fact that she is adapting! ;)
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DOWModder Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awwww... Thank you D-ear-est! :hug: I guess everybody has a soft spot, and plus some humor never hurts right? ;-) I know you gils can be grumpy from time to time, but thats only one of many reasons we men love you so much! :love: :tightug: Without you the life would be boring! :dummy:

Thank you for the sweet and warm comment my friend :huggle: I`m very much greatful! :nod:
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remedypain Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
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Ewo69 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This like makes you feel like you are full of fluff fluff afterwards :XD:! Ren, you are really good at writing romance stories! You really ARE :la:!! However, I'm feeling a bit like Tali right now because I've caught a cold and I'm coughing too much :cough: :(, that's the reason why I haven't been posting anything :noes:. I also was laughing so much over how Tag would cry over Fleet and Flotilla :rofl: :cough: god, I shouldn't have laughed, my throat is killing me!

But don't worry about me, keep on posting awesome storie-:cough:, well you get the idea.

P.S. At least I didn't fall of my chair. Why? Because I'm reading this from my bed.

Hunter: BUT you did fall off your bed.......

T'mio: And it did not go well......

Dora: :facepalm: at all........

Urdnot: BECUASE I HAD TO HEAL YOU AFTERWARDS! THEN I ATE A FISH TO FEEL BETTER :shakefish:

Zel: But I burnt it.......:D

Goto: You know, punching somebody in the right eye doesn't count as actual heali-

Urdnot: OM NOM NOM NOM- WHAT??? WANT TO JOIN HIM GOTO??????? :shakefist:

GET OUTTA HERE GUYS!!!!!!
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DOWModder Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Ahh, now I`m the one to suffer - my sides ache from laughing! :rofl: Thnbak for the wonderful review Ed! :hughfive: I`m sorry to hear you are sick, do get better soon my friend! :hug: Go drink some hot milk with honey, it helps very good! :nod:

As for the story - well some humor never hurts... except the times when it does, but who cares! :dummy: Tag is my funny persone, the one who represents my attitude to life, so I guess that`s why I always add some funny moments - I act this way in real life. :-)

P.S. Thanks for the support guys! :la: Ohh, that fish shake smile is priceless! :XD:
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Ewo69 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Hah, no problem at all Ren! I also have drunk some hot :milk: with honey, it was GREAAAAAAAAAAT!

Wait, wait, wait, wait, wait, wait.....so if Tag's personality is like you........then that means.........do you cry your eyeballs out when there are kissing scenes in movies???? :confused:

Oh come on everyone say something to Ren guys!

Hunter: :salute:No problem sir!
Dora: :rage: I TOLD YOU TO GET OUUUUUUT OF MY ROOM RINAT! *gets into ATLAS mech*
Zel::chainsaw::flame::flame::flame::flame::flame::flame::flame: BUUUUUUUUURNING!!
Goto::omfg:Fire AND ATLAS MECH :wtf: the world has gone crazy. I think I'm going to :faint:!!
Rinat::shakefish: GOTO!!!!! :slap::slap::slap::slap::slap::slap::slap::slap:
T'mio::sprint:HEY RINAT! DON'T START WITHOUT ME!!!!! :slap::slap::slap::slap::slap::slap::slap::slap::slap::slap::slap::slap::slap::slap:

Me: :iconfacepalmplz:
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